Random Original Character

Okay, so I was practicing making solid, believable characters for stories by using an online blank character sheet then drawing what I described and the result is Raz. She has a mortal fear of hairbrushes.
*approaches with a hairbrush*
Z:"GET THAT MONSTROSITY AWAY FROM ME!"
That's why her hair looks really, really messy. Was originally going to be a boy, which is why I gave her an androgynous look when I designed her. The red line with marks was so I could try proportion some limbs better. I KNOW HER SHOULDERS ARE TOO SMALL BUT IT LOOKS BETTER IN MANGA AESTHETICALLY SPEAKING SO SHUT UP. Rage over.